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Neural Foundry's avatar

Stunning worldbuilding here. The way the obi placement becomes a silent marker of status, instantly readable to everyone but inescapable for Sayuki, shows how embedded these hierarchies are. I've been to similar performancedistricts in modern Japan and that visual shorthand still exists in subtle forms. The ending leaves me genuinley unsure if the lantern flicker is supernatural warning or just draft, which makes Sayuki's choice feel even more isolating.

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@robopulp's avatar

I like the intrigue this promises.

How do you pronounce 短刀?

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