Devoid of soul...overwrought prose... pretentiousness... fundamental flaws in pacing, character development, and thematic coherence...hollow dialogue.. excessive description. Where is the nearest short pier? I need to take a long walk.
But....but... Hey! How encouraging it is that they at least acknowledged receipt of your manuscript. Hundreds wouldn't.
But what did they really think?
They didn't like me, too snobbish.
I wouldn’t summit to them again if you offered me $100000 🧐
"On a positive note, your relentless persistence in the face of such utter mediocrity is impressive.
One of our janitorial staff resigned last week. Are you interested?"
Thanks, I’ll think about it 😵💫
I think you nailed originality! Nice work.
That was a fucking cool story man. Didn’t know what to expect at first but it was good!
Devoid of soul...overwrought prose... pretentiousness... fundamental flaws in pacing, character development, and thematic coherence...hollow dialogue.. excessive description. Where is the nearest short pier? I need to take a long walk.
But....but... Hey! How encouraging it is that they at least acknowledged receipt of your manuscript. Hundreds wouldn't.
Creative!